Draft - Script #2


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  1. Much better. Hopefully, you can see the 'logic' in using the pulley gag at the end as opposed to the glass box/dunce cap. The pulley system is already been introduced as part of your universe (signs) by the time we get to see it used on the Mime. The real glass box/dunce cap were not established before appearing at the end.

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