Updated Animatic: Beginning and Gymnast Act
Following feedback from our OGR which was to use a bigger variety of shots, to get rid of the split screen, build up tension towards the punch lines etc. we have updated the first part of our animatic which includes the beginning and the gymnast act. (We will also be updating the other parts at a later date). We will also need to update our script and storyboard which we will also be doing at a later date.
These are the notes we wrote when discussing as a group how to change the first part of our animatic:
Updated animatic (beginning and gymnast act):
These are the notes we wrote when discussing as a group how to change the first part of our animatic:
Updated animatic (beginning and gymnast act):
Hi Emily. I have left a re-edit of your animatic (above) on Basecamp to help you. It's in 'Doc & Files / Example Edit' folder. In the example I have removed your logo (we can add that later if necessary) and removed the Mime moving from place to place (wastes time/animation). Overall, the edit is similar to yours but changes how the Mime is introduced and adds time in the dark to get a pay-off. It's just an example so the timing is sketchy (understanding the specific actions/performance in each cut would help that).
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